Friday Haiku

January 14, 2022January 14, 2022 / Tracy Abell

Eurasian Collared-dove. January 1, 2022

Smart and not-so-smart
warms herself on heated rim
then poops in water

~~Dove both smart and dumb~~ original line too mean & judgmental

3 thoughts on “Friday Haiku”

Prior...

January 15, 2022 at 2:06 am

Hahah / I like your “not so mean” version

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- Tracy Abell
  
  January 18, 2022 at 3:59 pm
  
  Yeah, the original felt unduly judgmental. 🙂
  
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  - Prior...
    
    January 19, 2022 at 6:43 am
    
    😊
    
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