Bogged down in minutiae

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Felt as if I was spinning my wheels in little details instead of moving the scene forward. But I’m keeping what I wrote because I believe there are nuggets of truth buried in there, truths that will help me further develop the characters/story line in the next draft.

And possibly the coolest outcome from this day’s work came when I told my mate I felt as if today’s words were bogged down in minutiae. He paused, and then pointed out that Bogged Down in Minutiae would be a great name for a band.

I’m not working toward starting up a band but somehow his insight made me feel better. However I choose to describe it, today’s work is done.

Happy Thanksgiving!

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I’m grateful the words continue to flow and am sending out a big THANKS to my LJ friends who are cheering me along the way. Your kind words and encouragement have made a world of difference as I work on this project.

Wishing all of you a Thanksgiving filled with much love and laughter.

More Than Two-Thirds!

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Had to be extra disciplined to get my words done today since we’re serving our big Thanksgiving meal for the homeless and other needy folks this afternoon/evening. I have two sets of neighbors who cook turkeys and between them they donated and cooked 21 this year. And that’s not all we’ll serve. It’ll be crazy busy/crowded there and I won’t get a chance to chat with many of the Monday regulars because of the crowd, but it’s nice being part of an effort to provide a good meal for so many people. And even though most appreciate the break from our weekly spaghetti menu, I guarantee someone will ask me today why we’re not serving pasta. 🙂

Sweating Blood

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I didn’t make it to the scene I’d planned on writing today. These words feel like the skeleton of what is needed to advance the story so I’m guessing that months from now, when I read this first draft, I’ll be thinking of ways to add flesh to this portion of the story.

Or maybe getting out the knife.

Hard-fought words

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I could push through a bit longer but am quitting since my eyes feel like boiled onions and my head seems a couple pounds heavier than it was yesterday. Where’s the Anti-Plague Fairy when you need her?

I know, I know . . . enough already!

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Please understand I’m completely aware how dull it is to look at someone’s daily word meter posting. But at this point, the damned thing’s like a drug. I need to type in the day’s numbers just to see how much blue I’ve got. Must…have…blue! And maybe I’m like some Pavlovian dog, but the meter IS pushing me to get results. So if it ain’t broke, I’m not gonna fix it.

You’re excused, though, from reading about and commenting on my progress. I realize some things in life, like the neighbor’s baby videos or slides from the in-laws’ motorhome trip to Wyoming, don’t hold the same magic for everyone.

The words keep coming!

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I’m so afraid to jinx this by announcing I’m not only pleased with my output the past few days, but that I’m also comfortable with the quality of the words. Yet here I am, courting disaster by gloating in public! Sure, lots of stuff will have to change but at this point I’m not just typing “The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog” to fill the page. (Although, if I hit a dry patch and can think of a way to incorporate a carnivorous mammal into my story, I’m not above that sort of ploy).

I guess the moral of this entry is to graciously accept the flow when it presents itself, and get as much mileage from that puppy as possible!

More words!

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I wasn’t going to post my word meter so soon but my son insisted I should. He’s almost as proud of my increased word count as me!

Today I thought a little about how some writers have a muse, and I wondered what guides me and my writing. Some of today’s 1337 (but who’s counting?!) words were written on the computer at home, some in the eye doctor’s office, some in the hallway outside the men’s restroom while waiting for my son. I guess I don’t so much have a muse as an ability to focus in on the words in little chunks of time while sitting, crouching, standing, etc. in various locales. Not as romantic an image as a gossamer-winged muse, maybe, but definitely a useful talent.

Rumsfeld Redux

In honor of his departure, here’s the quote that says it all:

“Reports that say that something hasn’t happened are always interesting to me, because as we know, there are known knowns. There are things we know we know. We also know there are known unknowns. That is to say we know there are some things we do not know. But there are also unknown unknowns — the ones we don’t know we don’t know. And if one looks throughout the history of our country and other free countries, it is the latter category that tend to be the difficult ones,” Rumsfeld said on Feb. 12, 2002.

HEY, RUMMY – DON’T LET THE DOOR HIT YOU ON THE WAY OUT!

I voted!

Just realized I forgot to check in. I hand-delivered my absentee ballot to the county clerk’s office this afternoon. Now I’m watching the national results. Very excited that we’re rid of both Rick Santorum and Katherine Harris, but bummed that we’re still stuck with Joe Lieberman. That man is going to make life hell on earth for the Democratic leadership that refused to stand up to him. Now we just sit back and wait for him to admit he’s really a Republican. Sigh.

Ah well, on a positive note, Vermont has just elected our first Socialist Senator! Let’s give it up for Bernie Sanders!!!!

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JoNoWriMo+1.5 Update

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I’m struggling with this project. The voice keeps coming and going, or maybe it’s my confidence that’s ebbing and waning. Either way, it’s an unsettling feeling and not too conducive to cranking out the words. But I’ll try to forge ahead with the understanding that everything that comes out may be total and complete crap.

The SCARIEST costume of all

I worked and worked on the verifiable voting issue in 2004 but it was an uphill battle to make sure our votes were counted as cast. People thought we were nuts, conspiracy theorists. Our coalition of concerned citizens made no headway, and I got burned out. Now here it is 2006, and we’re facing the same serious questions about our voting systems. Leave it to the the funny pages to highlight this serious threat to our democracy.

Runaway manuscript?

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I’ve got some momentum going but am feeling a bit out of control, storyline-wise, so forced myself to stop. I want time to let the new stuff sit and see if it still feels right tomorrow. If so, I’ll march ahead. And if not, well, that’s what the delete key is for.

Rutgers

I was a Rutgers virgin when I arrived in Piscataway – say it out loud, it’s fun! – last Friday but am now a seasoned mentee (which makes me sound less literary than gastronomical, I know). There’s so much I’d love to write about my all-around positive experience, but where to begin?!

How about . . .

Petite yet powerful Vivian Gray’s eloquent speech regarding her quest to acquire Rutgers sponsorship of an annual conference way back in ’68 during the riots against the Vietnam War. She arrived at a closed campus guarded by tanks and soldiers with guns and bayonets, and gained entrance to the campus where she went on to meet with then-President Mason Gross. When she apologized for taking his time during such difficult times, he told her there was no more important time to support those who write for children. I listened to her story, tears filling my eyes, and thought how we’re repeating history. Her story also put my emotions into perspective and I no longer felt nervous about the upcoming one-on-one with my mentor.

From the panel “Here’s a Piece of Advice”:

Book reviewer Judy Freeman declares Billy Crystal’s picture book GRANDPA’S LITTLE ONE the year’s worst book and WALK ON: A GUIDE FOR BABIES OF ALL AGES the BIRD BY BIRD for babies.

Agent Marcia Wernick advises writers to heed childhood rule of no kicking or biting along with “No ranting or raving” to editors. Also, declares the picture book market is loosening up.

Author Susan Campbell Bartoletti advises writers to not save rejection letters. Says it’s sick. Did admit that early on in her career when she received a rejection letter that seemed personal, she’d lick the editor’s signature to see if it was ink rather than a stamped signature.

Illustrator Sophie Blackall suggests that if a manuscript you’re asked to illustrate is too sweet for you, that there are ways to work in insidious things. Also refers to illustrator’s work space as a “hothouse of madness.”

Editor Susan Van Metre told a story from her early career in which she edited Jill Pinkwater’s manuscript, making comments in the margins. She received it back from Ms. Pinkwater who had countered each of the editor’s “I don’t believe the character would say this” and “I think you need a better word here” with her own comment: “I DON’T CARE.”

Five-On-Five discussion:

The three editors in the group agree that when writing a query letter in which you’d like to make a comparison to another writer’s work, it’s best to say “This will appeal to the readers of BLANK.”

Anthropomorphic characters are the kiss of death for chapter books (approx 7000 words).

Okay, that’s all for now. More later.