Agnes, again

Oops.  I thought we’d reached the end of the storyline about Agnes writing her first novel.  I was wrong:

Agnes by Tony Cochran

The obvious reaction would be to scoff at Agnes for her lack of gumption.  She’s a quitter!  I mean, of course a novel requires lots of words and of course writing those many, many words can sometimes feel like drudgery.  But then I thought back to what I’d accomplished on my revisions over the past two days and realized that I, too, am a sentencist.   I spent hours writing and rewriting the same lines, trying to find the tone and rhythm I need in order to revise the entire novel.  My word count for those days is pretty minuscule.  On the other hand, I finally produced the sentences I needed in order to move forward.

For the time being, I’m satisfied with my status as sentencist; I just have to remember that eventually those sentences need to come together to form a novel and that ideally the novel will be completed in this lifetime.

                

Hunkered down in revision mode

On Monday morning I suddenly realized I wanted to revisit my middle-grade that’s out on submission.  So I’m tightening and reworking some things.  It feels good to make the story even better. 

And

, in case you poke your head out of your writing cave today I want you to know I’m rooting for you.  Writing the ending is sometimes SO hard because I don’t want to say goodbye to my characters (and then there are the times I want to load them all onto a bus at gun point just so I can drive them off a bridge).  Maybe that’s a little of what you’re feeling; a bit of melancholy.  Either way, put down the paintbrush and get that story written!

Report back when you’re done, and I’ll do the same.

            

PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT

I just spent two hours at the Toyota dealership because of a CHECK ENGINE light in my Prius.  For those unfamiliar, the Prius is a hybrid, therefore, it has lots of computer stuff and battery stuff (like my mechanical lingo?!) going on.   I was told there were fifty possible explanations for that light.

I signed an agreement to pay a minimum of $110 to diagnose (and possibly fix) the problem.  I prepared myself for bad news.

Diagnosis:  LOOSE GAS CAP

That’s right.  No matter what type of car you drive, you must tighten the gas cap or else a vacuum or a leak (or something) develops which will cause that damned light to go on.  This problem is NOT specific to hybrids!

Sigh.

Good news:  I got lots of revision work done (I took over one of those little rooms where the salespeople put the screws to the poor souls negotiating a price for their new vehicle) so I could read my pages aloud and make necessary changes.

Gooder news:  They “only” charged me $55.

Goodest news:  There’s cold beer in the fridge.

    

Revisions Accomplished!

Thanks for your kind words and empathy in reply to my post about losing hours of revision work.  I’m happy to say I got that work done (again) yesterday and while it was AWFUL at the start, I pushed on through to the other side.  Several friends commented that the revisions would be better this time around, and it’s really true.  My brain remembered much of what I’d done PLUS it saw ways to add layers of complexity to the story.  Which might explain why these revisions took several hours longer than the original.  I got done just in time for dinner last night (compliments of Zippy Ramone).

That’s not to say I wasn’t on the verge of tears several times or that I didn’t contemplate throwing myself on the floor for a full-blown temper tantrum or that I didn’t make sure Zippy understood exactly how difficult it was redoing the work. 

Notice I said “Revisions Accomplished” not “Revisions Accomplished Gracefully.”

Now I can move ahead!

 

Talking to Myself

I just completed a painful set of revisions on Chapter Sixteen and wanted to highlight my writing buddy, the voice-activated recorder. I wasn’t looking forward to those revisions because while there was a lot right about that chapter, much had to change. Not only basic plot points but some nuance. It was going to get ugly.

Then I got out my voice recorder and just talked for ten minutes as I sorted out my plan of attack.

I’ve always had to talk through plotting or characterization problems but what I finally realized was that because I can’t write when I’m talking aloud, I often lose pieces of the puzzle. Talking wasn’t enough if I couldn’t retain everything. So I bought this handy gadget that catches every um, sigh, and epiphany. For those of you who are like me and must talk out loud to unravel your stories, I highly recommend a voice recorder.

I’ve even stopped cringing at the sound of my voice.