Agnes, again

Oops.  I thought we’d reached the end of the storyline about Agnes writing her first novel.  I was wrong:

Agnes by Tony Cochran

The obvious reaction would be to scoff at Agnes for her lack of gumption.  She’s a quitter!  I mean, of course a novel requires lots of words and of course writing those many, many words can sometimes feel like drudgery.  But then I thought back to what I’d accomplished on my revisions over the past two days and realized that I, too, am a sentencist.   I spent hours writing and rewriting the same lines, trying to find the tone and rhythm I need in order to revise the entire novel.  My word count for those days is pretty minuscule.  On the other hand, I finally produced the sentences I needed in order to move forward.

For the time being, I’m satisfied with my status as sentencist; I just have to remember that eventually those sentences need to come together to form a novel and that ideally the novel will be completed in this lifetime.

                

12 thoughts on “Agnes, again

  1. These have been so cute.
    I have many days I’m a sentencist.
    I rewrite a sentence innumerable times.
    Sometimes I move on or walk away, glad that the sentence is a place marker, waiting for my return to find the correct sentence!
    Do sentences haunt you?
    The ones that are like a rock in my shoe that I can’t dislodge?
    Yes. I’m dealing with a sentence today….

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  2. These have been so cute.

    I have many days I’m a sentencist.
    I rewrite a sentence innumerable times.
    Sometimes I move on or walk away, glad that the sentence is a place marker, waiting for my return to find the correct sentence!

    Do sentences haunt you?
    The ones that are like a rock in my shoe that I can’t dislodge?
    Yes. I’m dealing with a sentence today….

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  3. That’s exactly how I do it.

    Not big blobs. Little bits of blobs. The sentences are easier to tweeze and tease out that way.

    Like you, I want to find an easier way to do it for my next project. OR…this one, even better.

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  4. I’m a sentencist this week, as I revise. Mostly, I’m like Jennifer and newport the blob-ists. Great swatches of crap get thrown onto paper, then I hack away, finally I pull out the tweezers.
    It takes anywhere from five to eight revisions for me to get the tweezers out, though. *sigh*

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    • >>It takes anywhere from five to eight revisions for me to get the tweezers out, though.<<
      Yep, me too. Surely there’s an easier way to write a book. Then again, maybe we’re doing it right. Ya think?

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  5. I’m a sentencist this week, as I revise. Mostly, I’m like Jennifer and newport the blob-ists. Great swatches of crap get thrown onto paper, then I hack away, finally I pull out the tweezers.

    It takes anywhere from five to eight revisions for me to get the tweezers out, though. *sigh*

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