I’m drafting a scene in my YA,
slightly confused about the sequence of events.
Then thunder rumbling in the distance brought me to the window
and I found reassurance in the sky; there’s confusion up there, too.
Me and the sky, just two peas in a pod.
Tracy Abell 
There were some dark clouds today…hope yours cleared up š
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Oh, the clouds in my head weren’t so much dark as murky. It was hard finding my way in the scene. But then I had the reward of seeing those gorgeous clouds out the window and my head felt better. š
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“In my head and out the window”
…and if you put your head through the window the pain will go away. š
Uh, carry on…
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NOOOO! My head wasn’t feeling that kind of pain, only the pain of confusion. And the good news those feelings usually pass without me having to head-butt anything. But, hey, thanks for the suggestion, Barb! š
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