Maybe you’ve already seen this.
I just saw it on the blueboards.
It made me laugh and laugh
not because I’ve experienced this sort of “editorial direction”
but because it reminds me of being inside my head on this project.

What if, say, the main character dies at the end of chapter one.
I mean, not that but I mean something like that.
I mean, not like that but, yeah.
. . . . .

Yeah, so what if it’s not that but it’s JAWS?

THAT MITCHELL AND WEBB LOOK:  OK . . .NOT THIS