1) Last weekend I read I the first draft of my latest middle-grade novel after letting it sit awhile.
2) All week I've jotted notes and zeroed in on characters' motivations and reconfigured the plot.
3) I followed editor Kendra Levin's Five-Step Revision Plan, and created a
"one paragraph summary" that inexplicably mushroomed into multiple paragraphs.
4) I swing between moods of exhilaration and freak-outs about my chances of pulling this one off.
5) And then today I realized that, despite the first draft being written in first-person,
the story needs to be told in third-person.
Here, Tracy, gaze upon the starling to calm your nerves:
© Tracy Abell 2009
I wish everyone a wonderful weekend filled with epiphanies and maybe a few feathered friends!
As mentioned here and here, I've been using Scrivener to write a first draft
and while I love the program for many reasons,
I got caught up in my chapters being (easily accessible) separate files
and so never printed out anything.
As a result, I got a wee bit confused on plot issues
and came to a screeching halt when I felt overwhelmed by the whole process.
This past weekend I printed out all I'd written and read it again.
Wow.
Hard copies are awesome.
And helpful.
And absolutely vital to the writing process.
So, friends, don't scrimp on your paper usage just because it's better for the planet.
The planet does need our love and care, but so does our mental health.
© Tracy Abell 2009
Bwak!
What she said!
AGNES by Tony Cochran
Sometimes we need to establish boundaries so that our friendships may continue.
That said, I’m confident my friends here in LJ-Land who are all exceedingly supportive (tolerant?)
of my bird mania would varnish my nose if I asked nicely.
Yes, I used the "m" word despite the fact many, many people cannot stand that word.
I like it.
Moist.
It’s fun to say.
Try it.
Moist.
It rained all night and it’s still raining.
This Mourning Dove is on the backboard, preening in the rain.
2) but by that evening all euphoria was gone due to a Wildebeest implosion,
3) and we were forced to sort through the rubble.
This morning I ran the trails
and now I’m feeling so darn good.
I was serenaded by a Western Meadowlark,
scolded by magpies,
and raced by bunnies.
I was not attacked by any off-leash dogs,
did not stumble and fall,
and ran the entire way without stopping
Discovery consists of seeing what everybody has seen and thinking what nobody has thought.
Szent-Gyorgyi was a physiologist credited with discovering Vitamin C,
Have you ever felt insecure about the way you depict a sound in your writing?
The other day I struggled to come up with onomatopoeic words for an action in my story,
and ended up using "plonk" and "kerplonk."
Not genius, by any means, but usable words.
Except now I’m questioning how I hear things.
I’ve always used "creaky" to describe the sound of a Mourning Dove taking flight,
but just did research that indicates most, if not all, people would describe that sound
as "whistling."
Say what?!
When I start to panic and worry, I look to Nature for my calm.
Saturday I ran on the trails with Zippy while a Red-tailed Hawk soared above.
I would feel more optimistic about a bright future for man if he spent less time proving that he can outwit Nature and more time tasting her sweetness and respecting her seniority.
Yesterday was cold with a dusting of snow,
and this American Robin had to puff out its feathers to stay warm.
Today is sunny and the temperature will be in the high 50s.
Such are the joys of Colorado.
Sending and other cold-weather friends
a blast of warm air and sunshiny thoughts . . .